Writing 201: Poetry
Day 2: Gifts, Acrostic, Simile
Christmas lights and gifts
Hooray, the children spirits lift
Right around the corner, Mom and Dad sigh so sad
Instead of laughter they feel so bad
Singing children await the day
They can open gifts of toys to play
Mom and Dad kneel to pray
All the days before the day
Saving pennies till they say
Love and Joy will make a way
instead of toys it will be joy
Gifts of laughter will play the role
Heightened through spirited souls
They will learn that love and joy
Spring forth the laughter of children, ‘O, BOY!’
All will learn to share of themselves
Never needing of anything else
Diving into present time
Giving gifts without a dime
Instead of stress joy will take bay
Finding laughter in every way
This christmas day is finally here
Spirited children from far and near, share the joy with no fear.
by: Artistami Eva Ramos
Made me super excited for Christmas! I liked the message that I got from it- material gifts aren’t the only focus of Christmas. Being together with your family/loved ones is the best part 🙂
Christmas is one of my favorite time of year. And the gathering of family is what I love most, with the joking and laughing, not to mention all the food. Best gift we can ever receive.
Cool poem! Gave me vivid images in my mind, I thoroughly enjoyed this! I liked that it rhymed as well.
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.
Excellent and joyful too 🙂
Thank you.
You are welcome 🙂